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--- zxarr:timeline [2023/11/22 08:12] – zxarr
+++ zxarr:timeline [2025/07/06 03:53] (current) – external edit 127.0.0.1
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+This timeline is not accurate and is in a state of flux.  Most of the things did happen to Zxarr, but the order needs adjusted.
 <dwtimeline title="The Life of an Immortal" description="">
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 </milestone>
-<milestone title="Year 211.2" description="[[zxarr:planet_numer-shi|Nu'mer-Shi]]">
+<milestone title="Year 211.2" description="Nu'mer-Shi">
-After observing the locals for a few months, he finds them to be quite interesting.  They seem to be a very enlightened people, even with their simple ways, or possibly because of?  They called themselves Joji.
+After observing the locals for a few months, he finds them to be quite interesting.  They seem to be a very enlightened people, even with their simple ways, or possibly because of?  They called themselves Joji and this planet is named [[zxarr:planet_numer-shi|Nu'mer-Shi]], or rather the land is called this.  These people have no concept of things like planets.
 </milestone>
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 <milestone title="Year 691.1" description="Universe 3: Firefight">
-The StarDiver arrives smack dab in the middle of a battle, in space.  Missiles and energy beams streak through the blackness of space.  Explosions and massive, slow moving battleships, exchanging blows.
+The StarDiver arrives smack dab in the middle of a battle, in space.  Torpedoes and energy beams streak through the blackness of space causing explosions to ripple across the hulls of massive, slow moving battleships.
-Kreager looks at Zxarr after watching a hunk of armour deflect off the hull, "Can we go back now?"
+Kreager looks at Zxarr after watching a hunk of debris bounce harmlessly off the hull of their ship, "Can we go back now?"
 </milestone>